NI2 3/10/11

Murcia is a beautiful and small city located near of the cost of Mediterranean sea. Almost all year is sunny and warm, except in summer when is hotest places in the world.
(Correction) Murcia is a beautiful and small city located near (of) the coast of the Mediterranean Sea. It is sunny and warm almost all year, except in summer when it is one of the hottest places in the world.

People are extrovert and kind and there are a lot of festivals or holidays on depend of the season. In winter, like everywhere, here have the Christmas days, in spring are very popular the bando the la huerta or el entierro de la sardine, with traditional food and clothes, are parties very happies with music by street.
(Correction) People are extrovert and kind and there are a lot of festivals or holidays depending on the season. In winter, like everywhere, we celebrate Christmas. In spring, the “bando de la huerta” or “el entierro de la sardina” are very popular, with traditional food and clothes, and there are some parties which are great/a lot of fun, with music in the street.

In summer the most of people go out to the beaches althouth currently many people go to the foreing countries. In September is the feria with bullfighters and typical taberns maked specially for these days in the public gardens of the city and the attractions in la Fica
(Correction) In summer, most of the people go to the beaches, although currently many people go to foreign countries/abroad. The fair is in September, with bullfights and typical taverns made specially for these days in the public gardens of the city and the attractions in “la Fica”.

merry-go-round
1 [countable] a machine that turns around and around, and has model animals or cars for children to sit on [= carousel AmE; = roundaboutBrE]
roller coaster [countable]
1 a track with very steep slopes and curves, which people ride on in small carriages at FAIRs and AMUSEMENT PARKs
big wheel [countable] British English
a machine used in AMUSEMENT PARKs, consisting of a very large upright wheel with seats hanging from it, which turns round slowly [= ferris wheel]
tram‧po‧line [countable]
a piece of equipment that you jump up and down on as a sport. It consists of a metal frame with a piece of strong cloth stretched tightly over it.